Afghanistan

Afghanistan is one of the poorest countries.                   

It’s like a wrecked car.                 

It can be repaired.

Afghanistan has some resources.

It has natural gas, copper, and coal.

Afghanistan is landlocked.

Afghanistan is hurt.

It is devastated by war, violence, and political chaos.

Afghanistan is still rebuilding.

It has improved in 2005.

Afghanistan people live on two dollars a day.

It`s industries are based on agriculture.
Afghanistan has some traditional industries.

It has wood working, leather crafting, basket weaving, pottery, tile molding, and hand milling of grains.

Reviews

[Eldee]

Well- this is certainly different.
I confess that it seems more like the rattling off of facts, but I suppose facts are poetry of reality as much as anything else is. Perhaps if you added some emotion into it? I don't know why you are writing of Afghanistan, I don't know how you've come to learn of all these facts. If you add some of those answers in then your poem will flow and become something different- something more....