Basketball Vs. Softball

Basketball Vs. Softball

A Poem by ~Death Is The Key~

Likes of Basketball,

Dribbling,Focus,Hitting,

The Softball Sport, Fun!

© 2009 ~Death Is The Key~


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~Death Is The Key~
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Lovely Haiku, but I think the second line is only six syllables. "Dribbling" is pronounced drib-bling, not dribb-uh-ling.
Good luck!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi,
You know I was thinking about writing about Basketball and Softball too. Cool huki. Keep writing. Kat24

Posted 15 Years Ago

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 Added on November 8, 2009

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