The Black Blur

The Black Blur

I hear something in the distance,

I slowly turn to see a blur,

of the creature that's coming,

coming fast,

so fast,

that it's nothing but a black blur,

a blur of such a creature,

unaware of what it is, I turn again,

and another blurry creature,

only it's coming the other direction,

I turn half way and now I see...

the beady red eyes of another,

so now not just one creature,

but three,

I look behind me and see the fourth coming near,

I am trapped nowhere to go,

can't run,

can't hide,

can't do anything,

I start to get dizzy,

and fall to my kneese,

to find,

nothing but blackness,

nothing at all.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Aradie Rain]

Very creepy, if I dont say so myself. The thought of being trapped all around and no escape, well that freaks me out! Good write, looking forward to more of your work.