The Fire In My Heart <3

The Fire In My Heart <3

A Poem by Karli
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a poem about the Love inside of you

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This frightful weather is overwhelmed by my flames

They match the Love in my Heart, which can't be tamed

The Flames begin with a cackle, but end with a roar

All silence in your Heart has long ceased.

 

The aroma blankets you with warm memories

of Love past and present day

It's not a Fire you can see, only feel in your heart

You have a wonderful gift of warm passion.

What exactly is this fire?

Is it Hope?

Peace?

Happiness?

Maybe it's combined into a family.

Perhaps it's God, your amazing Savior.

The real answer lies inside of you.

Everything good is in Love itself.

Remember the Hope, the Peace, the Fire.

The Love.

<3

© 2010 Karli


Author's Note

Karli
I know this sucks. I wrote it in study hall, where I couldn't concentrate too well. So, I want to do a re-write if you guys really think it's that bad, because I think it's a good concept. So, please don't give me harsh reviews, but give me advice! Thanks:)

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Clearly a piece that is full of passion - and in that sense it is strong... and I think it is a great concept too. Some nice word choices too... "The aroma blankets you with warm memories" - that would be my favourite line of this poem
Nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, this isn't even CLOSE to 'suck'! It's amazing! You couldn't have written this any better than it already is. Trust me, it's great. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


This . . . This does not suck.
I can feel the passion coming from it.
I like the flow and I like the way you wrote this.
You did a very nice job on this poem, as well.
Keep up the good work!
Favorite line;
"The aroma blankets you with warm memories
of Love past and present day
It's not a Fire you can see, only feel in your heart
You have a wonderful gift of warm passion."
Though the rest of it is beautiful, as well. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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My name is Karli. Jesus. Youth Ministry. Europe. "He has told you what is good...do justice, love mercy, and walk humbly with your God."-Micah 6:8. more..

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