Chemo

There`s a chemical

and she is very salty

She only feeds on vegans

Surrender.

All my feelings remain.

I`ll try not to complain

about why Atlas has 

denied me.

Even my bed bugs have 

scurried.

These fountains of thoughts

achieve no other than drowning

my pillows

There`s a weezer under the bed

and he is silent, but deadly

Woe, to whom finds him sheathed

Some rather subject to his asthmatic carols

Surrender.

Silent revolutions.

Silent orphans fill to the brim

I wouldn`t dare say it isn`t so

Their trumpets are numberless

And mine are too.

One day we`ll no longer surrender anymore.

Vegans won`t have to pretend they loathe the notion of menocide

Victims will become victorious

No more cancer treatment advertisements on the television.

Low and behold being naked and hairless.

My children will be fearless.

Author's Note

All of my poetry is original and copyrighted.

Reviews

[CC Faye]

Reading this made me confuse. It's hard to grasp the words that you are saying. The first stanzas were a little confusing, but later at the end, I finally get what the poem meant chemo.
This work is very original, and I like that, but it feels like the narrator is talking about power and death. Thanks for letting me read your work!

[Kleio13]

I thank you very much for your honesty and appreciation CC.

[Einstein Noodle]

ok .. being picky i know but:
"Even my bed bugs has " .. ? bed bugs have? ..
"These fountain of thoughts" .. ?these fountains of thought ?..

there is all the prickly cactus of your chutzpah that enamors me to your poetry in this one .. Chemo is such a serious subject .. and it's ill effects as well as good ..
for me the "Orwellian" ending is hopeful .. which i .. the eternal optimist appreciate .. and for me as i clutch every last follicle .. i am so in respect of hairless ..
E.

[Kleio13]

Your`e right it needs editing. Thank you for your review E.

[Einstein Noodle]

so glad you are finding a little time to hang around here! ;)

[Kleio13]

Thank you! I missed you!