Stream of Endless Tears

I loved, I lost, I thought I culd carry tha weight

like moss. I thought we were one but to you,

the day we begun

 waz also tha day we were done. such heartbreak
will rattle one's soul til they feel empty N cold,

 also unfulfilled and
controlled. tears rolled az U left,

I thought 4 certain

it had brought me 2 tha
knees of death. tha light of my heart was

slowly bein drained, crys of disbelief
couldnt ever again be so ill contained. liar 2

my family, traitor 2 my heart.
everytime I think about tha truth, wat comes

2 mind is a descriptive picture of
a wolf tearin an animal apart. the stream of

endless sorrow is nw insight, ill
jus jump in and drown instead of fighting for

wat I thought waz right. in a
flash through the night, tht life ended w/o a plight

Reviews

[Amit Parmessur]

I particularly like the structure... it tells a lot more than the words seem to.

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...A-mazing write here, i like the simpleness of the form.
Very expressive and writ well...

[Matthews Reggie]

really good work... simple poem but i had to read it twice ti make the most of it... But one thing i noted, i hate use of short-forms U,N,w/o etc... It is my personal opinion.. most may even ignore it... Rest it is a brilliant work of poetry..