Thus Uncurable

Thus Uncurable

A Poem by Catala
"

when a mystery is the problem, not love... How can you solve it without breaking the red tape? an actual NEW piece.

"

On a bed made with Medical Advances

Bodies are thrown further from eachother each day

The covers piled higher and higher,

To replace the bodies once held in warmth.

The names "Sweetie" and "darling" given to pets

Instead of lovers.

 

Oh we never saw it coming

Health begets loneliness,

And tears are shed as we each

Blame ourself,

For what is unknown

Thus Uncurable.

 

Two sets of Eyes

Glance across a dinner table at eachother

And they feel new,

Fresh with the intrigue,

of the flowered centerpiece,

To hide our fears.

 

Oh we never saw it coming

Health begets loneliness,

And tears are shed as we each

Blame ourself,

For what is unknown

Thus Uncurable.

 

 

© 2008 Catala


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This definitely made me stop and think. A well written poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is thought provoking. I like the way you combined the two words "each" and "other" to make one feel the togetherness of two sharing loneliness. Excellent work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

180 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on March 6, 2008

Author

Catala
Catala

LA



About
I'm uploading old poems, and trying to write some new, so, yes, massive uploads. sorry ehheh "What is plucked will grow again, What is slain lives on, What is stolen will remain What is gone .. more..

Writing
Wholly Me Wholly Me

A Poem by Catala