The Pit

The Pit

A Poem by Courtney Rose

Dreams may fall
Sweat runs down your back
Crawling for your life only to be tossed back into the pit
The world can be nothing but a disappointment


When the high goes
The glass runs empty
the demons come to play


As the lights switch off
When the sun sets
You got to dig deep
find that fire in your heart


Dig deep
Keep climbing
Wipe your brow
push forward


Yes the world can be disappointing
may push you down
But that doesn’t mean you give up

© 2014 Courtney Rose


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why did you left me??
is it my fault that i loved you??
is it my fault i gifted you my life??
so...grief you may dance on my chest
this is my truth, that i loved you even you gave up on me,
so let me die with your shadow,
But don't leave me conversing with your summer and severity of your spring,
because without you i am drowning, in a sea its water has been dried, wrote on it why did you leave??
why did you leave?? and you know i loved you even more than my self??



Posted 10 Years Ago


Anas Reyad

10 Years Ago

i think Piece of prose talk about the same idea and would be happy if you just keep it i almost now .. read more
Courtney Rose

10 Years Ago

That's really well written-love it
Anas Reyad

10 Years Ago

thank you hope that indeed

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Added on January 27, 2014
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Tags: sweat, dreams, disappointment, the pit, don't give up, crawling for your life, world of disappointment, high, glass, empty, demons, lights off, light, sun sets, sun, dig deep, fire, dreams may fall

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Courtney Rose
Courtney Rose

Canada



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hmm let's see.... short Canadian weirdo, self proclaimed nerd Live long and prosper more..

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