Erotica

The literature of human desire.

I’ve never felt like this,

Not this intense.

This potent bliss

Reverence.

 

The key to love is sex,

The key to sex is love.

 

Touch me

Taunt me.

I can’t breathe

Save me.

 

The key to passion is pain.

The key to pain is passion.

Say my name,

Scream it...Hard.

Astral ecstasy and pain,

Take me to the stars.

 

The key to intimacy is ecstasy.

The key to ecstasy is intimacy.

 

Taste me.

Undress my feelings…My lust.

Burn my control…To dust.

Energize me...Robustly.

 

Bodies trembling like purrs of passion,

Lurking in your scream.

Like ravaging waves of compassion,

Washed up in my dreams.

 

At the end,

Awaken the choirs…To sing.

What I intend,

A sinful hymn,

Of the sire within,

Desire within.

Reviews

[Master K-tops]

This leaves me short of words. The beautiful words form an erotic symphony of love and passion. I like the wittiness of the expressions : The key to love is sex/The key to sex is love, sinful hymn, like purrs of passion. I think it's brilliant and deep.

Taste me.
Undress my feelings…My lust.
Burn my control…To dust.
Energize me...Robustly.

This paints an extremely viviid picture of burning hot romance. It is usually very hard to express such passions with words but you somehow manage to do it. This is an intriguing piece. 

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thank you. I appreciate your thoughts

[Jennifer Shaw]

My goodness! This makes my poem about pleasure look like child's play! Our thoughts are similar, though. This is often how I think of sex. It's just incomparable bliss when shared with someone who loves it just as much as you do. I loved this piece. Thank you for sharing. Aaaaand subscribed.

[Fran Marie]

A forceful passion pushes through in this piece...filled with a longing , a fiery desire with the deep feelings for lustful play and love making...sweet!

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

THANK YOU FOR THE GENEROUS WORDS.

[Tania]

Such a truthful writing.. I really enjoyed reading this :)

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thank you. I'm really glad that you enjoyed this piece.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I really love this so honest, true and free hymn of love...It`s very intensive, living and expressive with so much intensity of verbs, passions and desires are all melted in fire of the feelings...I love that, as it makes the love feeling like familiar dreams, and that is also so close to me! Wonderful piece...It`s one of my favorite poems...thank you

Bodies trembling like purrs of passion,

Lurking in your scream.

Like ravaging waves of compassion,

Washed up in my dreams.

:: nia ::

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'M REALLY GLAD YOU LIKED IT AND THAT IT TOUCHED YOU.

[AprilRN1210]

nice play with words.. love the way you started this one.. the melody of this sinful hymn suggests passionate desire in wicked beats.. nicely done my friend.. it simmers just under the surface promising lustful fun.. :)

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thanks for the nice words April. I'm glad u enjoyed it.