Dishonest Embrasure

The prayer of the heartless.

Connect,

The  dots  to  find  your  perfect love.

Perfect,

The  experiment  that  gives  you  hope.

Drown  me,

In  seas  of  silence  oh  so  deep.

Make  me,

The  essence  of  violence  oh  so  sweet.

 

This,

Could  have  been  love  if  not  so  hard.

If,

Only  I  had  a  heart  to  turn  to  sand.

In,

The  eyes  of  a  dove  so  bright  and  pure.

Whose,

Light  will  depart  to  create  a  cure.

So  sail,

Within  the  ocean’s  everblue  rage .

Embrace,

The  empty  space  in  every  turning  page.

Deny,

The  arrogant  mind  its  words  of  woe.

Believe,

In  every  lie  you’ve  ever told.

 

My,

Heart  is  the  cheapest  w***e  untouched.

Wounds,

Trying  to  heal  untreated  pain.

Eyes,

Seeing  the  truth  and  turning  away.

Lead,

The  compass’ arrow  to  a  course  unseen.

 

Are you proud of the lie you’ve become?

Or are you ashamed to say your name?

Heartbreaker…Promise maker…Liar 

Author's Note

Trying a lot of new things. Tell me what you think.
Opinions are very important to me.

Reviews

[Jennifer Shaw]

This poem actually made my toes curl. Your way with words is breathtaking. I know the feeling of this poem well. You are a very gifted writer.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thanks a lot Jennifer. And you must know that I feel the same about you.

[JayceeC]

Once I got used to the right justification this write began to flow seemless. You have some great descriptions "my heart is the cheapest w***e untouched" great line!

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thanks a lot. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[MsJewel]

I can feel the emotion in your words - there is pain and anger, but beauty as well.
"drown me in seas of silence" - a wonderful line.
Your poem is well written and heartfelt.

:) Julie

[nazia]

This is one deep piece. Emotions scattered all over the place. There is sadness, a desire to overcome it and anger.. all in one work. I like it :)

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thanks a lot. I'm glad that you could feel the different elements that I used here.

[Ilerah]

Its deep, well written. And honestly a good poem. Nicely done!

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thanks a lot.