until that day

"my heart opens to your voice"

i'm gonna turn off the lights

stay up, in the moonlit living room-

stay up to face this uninvited gloom

kiss as many nights

as the pieces of my broken heart

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kiss as many nights

as the moments we're apart 

'til the day the moon kills my loneliness

with his sweet embrace, in an untouched place 

Author's Note

no critic out here? I love acid attacks on my face better than showering of praise.

Reviews

[Boldpen]

The poem was lovely.
Great flow.
Expressions were beautiful.... and i am truly sorry that i can't acid attack you on this piece, because, I didn't found anything to pinch you on.
just nice work... a little longer piece could have implied a stronger impact but the simple yet wonderful poem of yours is near to perfect. Good Job!

[Art]

meditatively refreshing...to seek the embrace of the moon or those mysteries of life...those moments that enrich us as we grasp those Universal skies...nicely written poem...

[Dayran]

A endearing poem, obviously addressed to Siva, as the master-keeper of the moon's reflected wisdom on his head. May he grant his devotee her wishes. Nice!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I can't critisize, I'm not qualified to...and cause I truly love it :)