Freeze

Symbolic of our desire to freeze certain moments of life

Standing upright, far across the room

Near the curtains waving in rhythm

In this evening lit up by the candles

Painted by your silhouette of grace

Felt by the warmth of your embrace 

If this scene could be frozen

I would't sell it for millions

Save it as a priceless memory

As a Solace

Until the dusk of Eternity  

Author's Note

Thanks to drop in.

Reviews

[DeliriousCerises]

I think we've all been there. In a moment we wish would last forever. This poem seems pretty straight forward, but pretty. It describes something pretty. It rings softly in my head like a compliment whispered in your ear by a dear companion. Good job.

[Acropolix]

It is a price glady paid for, but too costly to offer. Nice work again Kruppz.

[Dayran]

A picture is worth a thousand words, especially where it is an expression of a sentiment or emotion that trails our lives. In coming to speak of things we enable ourselves to be familiar with the desire we feel and what we are doing about it.