Wrath

Wrath

A Poem by Kaleidoscope Apocalypse

Raven-haired locks twisting in the wind
Sea green eyes flashing violently with envy
Emotions gone awry, liquid hate pouring out.

Twisted rain slapping down; lightning striking out in rage
The perfect scene, the stage is set

"Alena.. Alena.." he whispers on the air

A single name crossing the ocean
Sparking an electric current with a fire tinged in green

She raises up a hand,
Silently halting his forked-tongue from yet another lie

"Alena.. Alena.." he pleads against the storm

Glancing quickly up she finds her nerve
A menacing glare shocks the night air
A single whisper cuts through the deluge,

"My name is Christina."

She turns and walks away.

© 2008 Kaleidoscope Apocalypse


Author's Note

Kaleidoscope Apocalypse
This needs some work, I just needed to get it out before something happened..

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WHAT?
I thought your name was Krysi!
I am so confused! lol.

I tease, I tease...

lol. Anyway.

Poetry? Me likie.
Lots of rageful description *sighs*
It looks like there's a bit of inspiration with mine, but I like it.
We could write a whole story out of these wrath-smitten things.

I'm liking this idea a lot... lol.
Interested in co-authoring an epic with me?



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow was not expecting the ending there... nicely done!

~Frances~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good! I read your description, and yet I wasn't quite sure where you were going with this. Nice job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WHAT?
I thought your name was Krysi!
I am so confused! lol.

I tease, I tease...

lol. Anyway.

Poetry? Me likie.
Lots of rageful description *sighs*
It looks like there's a bit of inspiration with mine, but I like it.
We could write a whole story out of these wrath-smitten things.

I'm liking this idea a lot... lol.
Interested in co-authoring an epic with me?



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kaleidoscope Apocalypse
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