Fool's Dance

You whisper in my ear

Come dance with me.

I want to pull away,

I know I should run,

but I am spellbound by your beauty

your charm entices me.

 

You lure me into your seductive dance,

and I can't help myself

with your smile

so inviting.

 

What is this irresistable magnetism?

Its frightening, yet

it excites me,

Oh how your touch leaves a trail that

burns so deep it awakens a fire inside,

A fire that burns away all cautions

and scorhes away any inhabitions.

 

I want you to leave,

but I pull you back

holding tight to my destruction

allowing your infestation

to poison my spirit

blacken my soul.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh what loveliness ,this is so nice..still this is love ,you know when you are stuck in it,it pulls you here and there
and you have no say whatever,it could work on you in all ways,it could drown you ,sink so deep,lots bitterness
you lose control,still its so alluring and always calling you and you follow even if to your demise,sweet sweet love
You whisper in my ear come dance with me,I pull away ,I know I should run,spellbounded by your beauty
You force me to your dance and I follow,your magnetism is frightening exciting,oh how your touch deeply moves me
it burns so deep,sets a fire inside me..your fire calms all my cautions and inhibitions..and like a fool I just follow
want you to leave but i pull you back,you are a disease ,my destruction,poison to my spirit,you kill my soul
such loveliness ,i really loved this so much
lovely write..

[LostInThought ♥]

Amazing!! Truly amazing!! It flows great, and I love how there is a story line to it... It kept me reading! That is quite rare! :) Great job!

Would you mind reviewing my work?

[Tony]

Taking risks is what makes us happy in the moment and having hope that everything will be fine, is all about love...given or received. You did a great job with the word choice...so sensual and hot. Emotions felt.

Antony

[Lizanne]

The beautiful attraction to having what may not be the best thing for us. The desire and willingness to risk caution to enjoy the blush of the moment. Embracing life for the moment, in hopes it will carry to more minutes and hours. An almost dangerous submittal to love. Loved it!