Trust

A poem i did for my school's poetry contest, i rly like it and i won first place for group original since i recited it with a friend of mine.

Trust is a glass vase.

So clear, perfect, beautiful, special,

Until it's shattered, broken, tainted.

It can be fixed, you can forgive,

But like the vase, it won't be the same

Author's Note

I'll accept all opinions, just don't let them be too harsh

Reviews

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Rosario,

You are on a path of writing that can take you far. Some of the best writes, and writers, are those with the ability to reduce writes of great length into a powerfully placed single stanza.

Well Done! Keep Writing.

All we can do now is polish the vase...

Have a great day,

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