Mirror house of words

 

Mirror house of words

 

Really you are not talking to me

Through me

You are only

Talking to you.

 

In a mirror house

Reflecting tones of

Faces alike,

Faces talking to themselves,

Words flying to and fro,

                     Only to be reflected,

To be re bounded

And to show the limitation

Of life.

 

 

Reviews

[E.M. Lev]

I really love the structure of this. The way the idea of reflection can be interpreted in many ways is only complimented by the way your stanzas are laid out. The tone of this piece is really lovely and the last stanza truly acts as the frame for the entire poem. Great work!

[maddye]

Wow this one is really wonderful, thanks for making words dance.