Floor full of shattered mind

Floor full of shattered mind

A Poem by poddar kushal

---- Floor full of shattered mind

In an afternoon of untimely shower

Mind falls out of the benumbed fingers.

A winter of crazy white on the screen.

underneath is an open road to jump,

An open letter to do away with

         Life.

Unsilent moving picture of deep fatality

                 Flowers amid cold drops of water.

Far, so far you have gone, my wit

Far from my floor full of shattered mind.

I could have died out to prove fatigue

I could love you instead,

But, I chose to sit in a heap

On a floor full of shattered mind.

 

© 2008 poddar kushal


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Excellent imagery.
Rain - so real I felt chilly as I read.
Very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That is a superb image. . . it sounds so like broken glass "floor full of shattered mind". Excellent piece of writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem has a very circular feel and I love the way you take us a journey of sorts and then bring us back to where we began. This is quite an interesting and beautiful word picture...quite evocative too...so many layered meanings here. Lovely work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


What wonderful words and images this inspires.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on February 5, 2008

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poddar kushal
poddar kushal

kolkata, India, India



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life and trying to earn bread made me an advocate. mad at my own stressful self, turned to writing. poems mainly. but, there are several short stories published in my mother toungue 'bengali'.i live i.. more..

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