i keep it simple

simple

Look at your arms

And, at your prey.

“It is worthy of troubles.”-

Can you now say?

 

Reviews

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

I love it.
So true.
Short and simple.
Little words, deep in meaning.
Very strong piece.
Kudos.
=]

[JC Fox]

great piece

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This piece is having a great volume and strength behind it my friend.
It may seem a small write of 4 lines. but they are conveying a very deep meaning !!
superb work.

[IndigoPhoenix18]

Very intruiging! I love the way you edited the font size and color in the first line. Just out of curiosity, who said what is written in the third line?

[An Ordinary Woman]

I think I get it- but the only problem is, every time I read it, it comes from my mouth this way ...
This happens to me some times, not sure why. I do like it, poddarkushal u did good. :+)

simple Look at your prey
an arms length away,
"It is worthy of troubles."-
Can you now say?

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Succinct write that is elusive for sure. I am not quite sure why you mention to look at your arms as well as your prey unless you are thinking they may be your prey as well. That is one thought that strikes me with this piece. I like how you end in a well worded question. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Danielle Asher]

i am sorry to say i don't understand. I feel like I am the one missing something. if you get a chance shoot me a message to clarify if you don't mind. I love short pieces like this and I am wondering if I am just tired and off my game.
thank you for sharing.