Damn

DAMN

 

Once a dream

 

Now a nightmare

 

Warnings sent my way

 

Warnings I ignored

 

Signs to get out

 

Signs I ignored

 

Damned be this place

 

Burning, burning in my chest

 

Pounding pressure in my head

 

Realizing I’m not like the rest

 

Anger grips me seeing red

 

Damned be this place

 

Damn

 

Author's Note

All advice welcome. All criticism positive and negative expected.

Reviews

[The Mad Prophet]

Not bad, I like how you expressed finding yourself in a damned world, then casualy putted to the side, Damn... Very creative.