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i just wanted you to know that you were my one and only
you took that too far and now its your fault your lonely
you used me and abused me till i couldn't take it anymore
when i left you only screamed at me to come back through your door
I'm tired of your little act its time to put it away
when its time to leave this earth no one will be sad that day
you act like you rule the world and then rule like a piece of crap
me and the rest of the world can easily get tired of that

Reviews

[zack]

this HAS A nice ryham

[Kaelyn Shea]

thanks !

[Glenn Davis]

I agree good rhyme and a solid flow.

[Frederick E. Conkling]

The rhyming is good, the flow from one word to another is great. Well done.

[Kaelyn Shea]

thanks greg

[Gregory H.]

I enjoyed this. It flowed great. And ryhmed perfectly...

10/10

Greg.