no name yet...

You tell me that i'm beautiful
even though i know you're lying
I sit and stare at the wall and
it feels like im dying

You walk in and
tell me i cant win
but i cant see you through my tears
that ive been crying for so many years...

Reviews

[Hippy]

short sad and good i like it your good at short poems

[the rei]

cool...

[Kaelyn Shea]

that be my writing hehehe

[DJ Quik]

very nice

[Kaelyn Shea]

:)

[bygones]

love this. It is straight to the point. And I can relate to it so much.

[Kaelyn Shea]

thanks angel of the night

[Keevan]

i like it.

and what makes it even better is when people can relate.
Nice Write

[Kaelyn Shea]

haha its cool believe me i am bored alot haha your not bossy

[Zarathustra]

You should get bored more often then....wait...now I'm telling you what you should do...Aww Shoot...I'm really not that bossy...promise =]

really, I enjoyed it a lot