you

he is my rock
He is my everything i know
He may not be perfect but
hes never let that show!

Author's Note

ummm ran out of rymes put more in later

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Yeah you should take "my" down. It'll definitely make the flow a lot better. This is a short but sweet poem. I like the straightforward approach and the confident tone.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Mr. Darkblood]

It's short, but sweet.
The only suggestion I have would be to cut out the "my" in the second line. It feels like it would be clearer that way

[Anna Kay]

i love it its sooo sweet!

[Kaelyn Shea]

its about the same person again :) hes a great guy

[thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:]

you don't nessesarily need to put more in, i think it's great and sometimes the best poems are one's that aren't finished :)

[Kaelyn Shea]

thanks

[Zarathustra]

Awww
This is Sweet =]

[Kaelyn Shea]

ok maybe i wont change it then :)

[Glenn Davis]

You have enough rhymes there. It is a strong place to end. :)