One day

One day

A Poem by Kaelyn Shea

One day i hope to wake up next to you

One day i hope to be in your arms

One day i hope to see your smile

One day i hope i get to hold your hand

one day i hope i get you forver

© 2010 Kaelyn Shea


Author's Note

Kaelyn Shea
if this sounds really stupid or whatever please tell me i was kind of upset when i wrote it so it may sound really sucky

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not "sucky".....it is genuine and sincere.

you just need to correct "forever" in the final line and you'll be golden.

hope the writing helped ease the mood for you!

hang in there!

Posted 15 Years Ago


No it's really good! We all want to find that one right person for us. it rocks!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


i feel the same way for someone... one day, i hope...... very good write

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 8, 2010
Last Updated on April 18, 2010

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Kaelyn Shea
Kaelyn Shea

Little Rock, AR



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