3 words part 2

found

fixed

loved

Reviews

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... and this follows rather well ... from part one ... the pieces are found ... the "self" is fixed ... and then eventually loved ... a hopeful sequence of words ... works yet again ... for a reader like me ... magic accomplished with three words here and in part one ... so magic with six words in all ... a great read ...

[mrityunjay]

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[Not A Writer]

I see the contrast. What was once lost is now found. What was broken is now fixed. What was shattered is now loved. Instead of using the word "shattered" in part one, in my opinion I believe you should use the word "hated." I can see it's a contrast between love and hate for you use the word "loved" in part 2. Cool to see a healing process after the hurt process. Good job here and the piece before hand. Ethan