could really use a wish right now

not one of my better ones but...

i could really use a wish right now
in the dead of night

no stars are shooting
for me to wish on

i could really use a wish right now
in the dead of night

ive wished so many times
they never come true

i could really use a wish right now
in the dead of night

every time i wish
i pray for it too

i could really use a wish right now
in the dead of night

just let one wish come true
just one....



....please?

Reviews

[Kaelyn Shea]

miss harley ann : yes actually it was :) i was listening to it when i wrote this. i havent tried airplanes yet but stars dont normaly work any more :

[Harley Ann]

I like this. Perhaps based a bit off of b.o.b.'s new song..? Haha, well, if you imagine Hailey Williams reading it, its just as good. No, its better. Because wish upon whatever you want, be it shooting stars or airplanes, but how many of them actually come true?

keep up the good work :)

[Brandon]

this was a grrreat poem never douut you're own work .......................................... i'll be on for sure at 2:00 and all night at 10:00