Nothing

I know that i messed up

and im sorry i made you mad

but please let me explain

dont let me sit in the cold rain

please let me make it up to you

let me tell you why

i only want to show you

how much you mean to me

and i didnt want to lose you

and now shes trying to get you

and you letting her take you away

you never mine officially anyway

so i cant get mad i guess

but i still dont want to lose you

now i mean nothing to you 

Author's Note

for jacob,
im sorry jake. i love you soo much and you know that. we talked everyday and now its been a week and we havent talked at all. im sorry i hurt you. i didnt mean to lose you like this. im sorry huney.
<3 sincerly,
your tuhtel baby

Reviews

[(:]

Apologizing in a beautiful way. Hope everything worked out(:

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem expresses that you lost someone due to something you did. A poem is a great way to apologize. The flow is off a little but your thoughts are clear.

[Paul Okeke]

nice piece of work..lovely..pouring out your emotion,,,you are better

[Kaelyn Shea]

its okay, i knew what you meant

[X]

oops.... spelled beautiful wrong :/ lol

[Kaelyn Shea]

haha thanks xavier

[X]

wow! SHEA!! simple and beatiful

[Kaelyn Shea]

thanks austin
even if you do rhyme i like your poems, i can relate to them easily :)

[Austin]

I like how this poem doesn't stress constant rhyme like a lot of them (a lot of mine, actually), because it really helps you get the point across and it expresses the way you really feel better than many poets can do when restricting themselves with the rhyme.