Ties (My-ku)

The ties that bind us

grow weak from tensile pressure

when silk becomes chain

 

 

 

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

A lot going on with so few words. Two things come to mind here, but I think this is about trust and equality in a relationship. Showing that strength in one, only weakens the relationship. I am probably wrong on that score though and will just let my imagination run away with me on the other meaning :-)

[LA Lorena]

you can never be wrong in your interpretations..........they belong to you.

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Well done...I'm wondering, is this a Haiku or a Senryu? It really skirts the forms, as it is an image, but is also filled with "feeling" as well. I shall ponder on this a bit. Either way, well done with the syllabic count, word choice and imagery. I enjoyed the ride!

[Kaylor Mason]

And a third person is usually the bolt cutter that shatters everything in infidelity and heartbreak

[David Scott]

(sly grin)...
I think it was voluntary? Ha
Great snip at this topic.

[LA Lorena]

thank you. I like sly grins. it's a giveaway that someone else thinks as I do. LOL ;)

[David Scott]

If you only... Well I hazard you may...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A powerful statement LL in such a few words.

[LA Lorena]

thank you. I'm becoming rather fond of the My-ku

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey whatever happened to read requests. I keep missing poems!

[LA Lorena]

I don't send many these days.

[LA Lorena]

you can never be wrong when left to interpret your own meaning into a poem. :)

[KAOlmsted]

I love your ku...that sounds vaguely dirty ;-)

[LA Lorena]

LOL, yes, it does. thank you. It's been a while since I've felt so dirty.

[KAOlmsted]

;-) Always my pleasure.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha LL you have to write a Kimmer Ku next!

[KAOlmsted]

*laugh* I think the dedication poetry fad has run its course, but thanks, John ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love should make you feel connected not restricted... nice one.

[LA Lorena]

ah, very wise grasshopper!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Would you like to try and grab the pebble from my hand? LOL

[LA Lorena]

why grab at pebbles when there are boulders to climb? LOL

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good point... the student has become the teacher, LOL

[LA Lorena]

that's what one gets when they have cheeky and sassy-assed students. ;)

[Frieda P]

You-ku'd a perfect one. That wraps it up nicely.

[LA Lorena]

My silk scarf collection nearly rivals that of my shoes and purses. ;)

[Frieda P]

Stop! I can't take anymore, will you marry me? ;-)

[LA Lorena]

what? and have you file for divorce so you can get your paws on half my accessories? do I look blond?????

[Frieda P]

Sort of yeah! haha, but only on the outside... thanks I needed a good giggle today.

[Jack...]

Though still it latches
wrapped tightly about our hearts
weakened yet still strong

Very nice.

[LA Lorena]

thank you