Caliente

Caliente

A Poem by LA Lorena

We danced salsa and drowned our inhibitions

in tequila and passion

my Spanish limited, his English halting

smiles and bold glances

paved a road that words couldn't

smoldering looks and brazen touch

spoke more clearly than any words ever could

language barrier breached, we spoke in tongues

a universal language

of breathless, wanton, panting whispers and sighs

two hearts in tune to music's fiery tempo

and bodies playing a staccato rythym

to their final crescendo

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 LA Lorena


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so.....did Miguel bring a banana to your cabana? sounds like you had a "fruitful" time on your vacation, my dear. what a sweet, entertaining little poem! well done! i am sure they will never forget our L A Lorena down there in the land of enchantment and salsa nights!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

8 Years Ago

Ah, can't blame a girl for dreaming, can you?
quinfinn

8 Years Ago

no sweetie, not in the least!



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Your dance moves so passionately... powerfully building as your minds and bodies move to that crescendo. This is that sweet, spicy moment when the world melts away and all that is left is euphoria. No words can possibly express this... only sighs. xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


You don't need to speak the same language to dance like that huh? Or were you? Hm

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

8 Years Ago

were I what? dancing? Ah relic, there is dancing, and then there is Dancing!
 Relic

8 Years Ago

haha. :)
so.....did Miguel bring a banana to your cabana? sounds like you had a "fruitful" time on your vacation, my dear. what a sweet, entertaining little poem! well done! i am sure they will never forget our L A Lorena down there in the land of enchantment and salsa nights!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

8 Years Ago

Ah, can't blame a girl for dreaming, can you?
quinfinn

8 Years Ago

no sweetie, not in the least!
¡Olé!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

8 Years Ago

wake me up when I've stopped dreaming, okay?
C.R.Turner

8 Years Ago

Sacre bleu! :/
Holy Salsa, that was saucy and spicy... sounds like you were getting hot hot hot down there.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

8 Years Ago

Only in my mind Dale. ;)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

8 Years Ago

Well sometimes fantasy helps escape reality.
Whoa, I hope you took pictures of this vacation! ¡Ay, caramba! Doing a little Spanish conquest dance here!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

8 Years Ago

I hope this satisfies your request! ;)
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Ha surpassed my expectations!! ;-)
They say that travel broadens the mind it also inspires the writing. Who had a good time then?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

8 Years Ago

I had a great time, just not as great as this poem implies. Imagination is a beautiful thing! ;)

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LA Lorena
LA Lorena

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