The Undoing

Tremulous fingers uncertain

a momentary hesitation

a steeling breath in

silken straps

g  l  i  d  e

off delicate

sunkissed shoulders

The shift, like his eyes, travel

d

o

w

n

w

a

r

d

 

puddle

a gossamer pool

at her high-heeled feet

He licks his lips in anticipation

hungry for the taste of her

She smiles shyly,

ever the coquette

all innocence and pink -tinged flesh

now led away to temptation.

He silently wonders at her ability

to make him so hard

she smiles knowingly.

Why do they always

make it so damn easy?

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Aidz]

swirl in the myriad of sequential pleasures with an eloquent tongue masterful in the ways of innocent flesh.... drink drink ,,,,

Ohh can others read this s**t yeah nice write umm kewl use of eloquent vowels cojoined in adjective ... Oh who am I kidding

[LA Lorena]

you never need to censor yourself on my account!

[Jack...]

Thanks God it's Saturday night...you continue to tempt my mind with your wonderful words. This poem clearly grabbed me and just would not let go.

[LA Lorena]

thank you Jack. Yes, safety in Saturday nights. Much of my work is not for the 9 to 5 time frame. ;)

[Jack...]

Though it would make 9 to 5 much more fun.

[LA Lorena]

LOL. true dat!

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

I really don't know lol
Nice one, LA

[Distant horizons]

I could tell you but what'd be the fun in that? :-)
I've always thought the easiest way to end wars would be to have the first naked ladies parachute regiment drop into a warzone wearing only high heels and lip gloss. :-)
Would at the very least increase the news viewing figures a hundred fold :-)

[LA Lorena]

you get some pretty damned smart ideas my green friend!

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Sheila Kline]

Love it - ah, we women do have such power over the "weaker sex"....but, we won't let them know that.....lol
Your words make a very teasing, and sexy write

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You women have the power... as they say a man wonders if he will have sex after the date, the woman already knows.

You feisty minx you, teasing the senses and leaving me to fill in the blanks.

[LA Lorena]

thanks Dale. Of course we women have the power. it's how it should be. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I guess I can't argue with that... well I could but I wouldn't win :)

[LA Lorena]

no, you couldn't. sometimes it is just best to smile, agree and say "yes dear"

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

yes dear

[LA Lorena]

I'm impressed, you can still learn! ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

that is right, now give me a treat and rub my belly :)

[LA Lorena]

LOL! You think me that easy of a mistress? how you misjudge me Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Actually since you have me r=trained I thought I was your pet :p

[Frieda P]

How did I miss this one?! Love the format...good question. That's just the way they're built, speed and performance, luckily we've got discernment and tolerance! ;-)

[LA Lorena]

it's an old on, so has been buried at the bottom of the back pages. thanks for reading. It was my first attempt at playing with formatting and form.

[Coyote Poetry]

Woman could undo men always . I like the way you write about temptation and desire. A very nice ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[LA Lorena]

thank you Coyote, glad you enjoyed it! it's nice to see you again!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh protect me from the certainty of a woman's charms. A flash of breast, a taste of p***y to come and we are dead meat. You bad, bad sex you!!

[LA Lorena]

ROFLMAO! Just thought I would try painting women from a different perspective here. And we're not bad, we're just drawn that way! ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No you have power over us that you deny but use with full effect. bad bad girl!

[C.R.Turner]

Women rule!! (no, literally) :D

[LA Lorena]

LOL. There is no shame in using all the tools in the toolbox.

[C.R.Turner]

Hahaha, so many double entendres, so little time!!

[C.R.Turner]

Wow! Who's doing who? Does it matter? Does it ever matter? :)

Smoulderingly sexy writing there, young Miss Lorena!!

[LA Lorena]

thanks for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it.