Hey Hey

just a little word play

 

Up

Side

and

Down

turned around when they heard

you at the door,

Back

Space and Trouble

tried to delete their mistakes

but it was too late and Type-o

left blood all over the carpet blue

Next day

we remembered

Turned about face

and rendered ourselves useless.

Author's Note

oh I don't know...

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An experimental type of poem. Always a brave thing to attempt. Sometimes word association helps us to formulate ideas or simply express feelings and issues we are going through. I like the word play used and it is a smooth read.

[Ed Hart]

trapeeze of a poem...i like it...arobic...