I hate Haiku

I hate Haiku

A Poem by Lola Nation

I am one haiku from hating you.

Seventeen syllables a day  does not

improve vocabulary nor does it

give you any authority on nature.

© 2010 Lola Nation


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Thank you for this. I think this is going to be printed out and placed on the bulletin board in the college writing lab. Or at least, on my wall.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*laughing*

And you are correct! I cant critique this, I dont like counting syllables, and I was told there would be no math.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I laughed out loud reading this! I usually prefer poems that instill imagery, but this is hilarious. I'll have to favorite it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hate haiku, too.
A few syllables to few
for making poet's brew.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

High Five!!!

What is form..hmm.. makes me scartch my head sometimes.. Love this little rebellious dity:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. You wrote this when drinking wine? LOL! Wow, interesting! Still I smiled reading this!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks Ed, I will not add when having wine anymore! ha!

Posted 12 Years Ago


what is it about those little forms that make people think they are smart?

I like the rebellious way you have four lines and extra syllables. I might have said 'one haiku away from hating you'



Posted 12 Years Ago


Now this is what I would call clever,
I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Lola Nation
Lola Nation

Los Angeles, CA



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