I hate Haiku

I am one haiku from hating you.

Seventeen syllables a day  does not

improve vocabulary nor does it

give you any authority on nature.

Reviews

[John D Phillips]

Thank you for this. I think this is going to be printed out and placed on the bulletin board in the college writing lab. Or at least, on my wall.

[Angelheaded Hipster]

*laughing*

And you are correct! I cant critique this, I dont like counting syllables, and I was told there would be no math.

[Syldor]

I laughed out loud reading this! I usually prefer poems that instill imagery, but this is hilarious. I'll have to favorite it.

[Ed Hart]

I hate haiku, too.
A few syllables to few
for making poet's brew.

[cest la vie]

High Five!!!

What is form..hmm.. makes me scartch my head sometimes.. Love this little rebellious dity:-)

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

I like this. You wrote this when drinking wine? LOL! Wow, interesting! Still I smiled reading this!

[Lola Nation]

Thanks Ed, I will not add when having wine anymore! ha!

[Emily B]

what is it about those little forms that make people think they are smart?

I like the rebellious way you have four lines and extra syllables. I might have said 'one haiku away from hating you'

[celyn]

Now this is what I would call clever,
I love it.