Her

Her

A Poem by Delilah

Her breath trembled as she focused inward,
away from the headaches and kind faces,
away from the accommodating laughs, the calling kitchen,
Her hands fell from wall to wall,
each surface helping the footsteps that followed.
maybe if she could just focus on one spot the world would stop spinning for a while
she'd much prefer a static blur to the moving stationary that surrounded her.
Her legs crumbled gently beneath her,
maybe if she could
 just match 
her breaths 
then it would stop feeling as if they were sputtering.
It's probably just sleep.
She didn't get much of it last night, or the night before
or-
The family is fine, thanks
She has to go, Mum's calling her

© 2014 Delilah


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

An emotional and intense piece, that last line, "The family is fine, thanks/She has to go, Mum's calling her" was heartbreaking.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delilah

9 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad the emotion translates

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

128 Views
1 Review
Added on July 24, 2014
Last Updated on July 24, 2014

Author

Delilah
Delilah

About
In the words of Pablo Picasso, 'To draw, you must close your eyes and sing'. Perhaps rather than over thinking, one must close their eyes and let the words and their nuances flow on their own account .. more..

Writing
focus focus

A Poem by Delilah