Silver Death

Liquid ice,

Silver thread spiders web,

Black widowed death.

Reviews

[Mike P.]

i read this with the title as the first line. this just comes together very well. short, sweet.
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[Legion]

Woohoo. Cool haiku. I see many black widows where I work. They are so beautiful, but I still won't kiss one. :)

[FC Writers Club]

typical hiaku, good flow. Good description of the spider web. Great write.

[stork]

Hello Lauren,

A great contrasts of colors - ice, silver and black. The sting/twist in the last line works well.



stork

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, I really loved this one!

[Ken Simm.]

This and desrt should be put together. Opposites that compliment.

[Aaron J. Wald]

I like it...but not the subject. Spiders scare the hell out of me. Even though I am a pagan and believe in reincarnation...and talk to spiders to reduce the fear....I am scared as hell of them.

[Poeticpiers]

terse and very much to the point almost a haiku in form