Beginnings

I can't remember what this type of poem is called as this is my first go so if anyone recognises the style please let me know!

Beginnings

That lead onwards

Tide of a new suns birth

Swept away in endless ocean

Beginnings

 

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

Hi dear writer-friend

At first sight I thought it was a 'cinquain poem', but after I counted the words I'm not sure since a cinquain poem has -one then -two then -three then -four and then one word(s).

But however it is called you've done a great job here. You made me want to go on reading - to like to read on more ...

Thumb up for your first!

[Lexi Nicole]

Beautiful. You've said a lot in so few words. I feel like I've seen this style of poem before but I just can't remember what it's called. I do like it, though ^^. Lovely work!

-Howl