A Silent Plea

A Silent Plea

A Poem by Carly Ithilhin
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Just... What I think every girl has inside her.

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Under all that makeup
Under all those clothes
Underneath those hollow, haunting eyes
Especially, underneath that "charming personality"
There is a girl

With long, tangled hair
Nothing like yours, without a hair out of place
With wild, vivid eyes
There is a girl
And this girl is you

Not the docile, perfect object
You pretend to be
But the true you
The one who longs to run free through the fields
Free of expectations
Free of limits, free to be herself

What happened to her? 
Why have you changed?
When years ago, you thought you could do anything
The world was your oyster
Why now, are you confined?
Why must you be what they want you to be?
Do you fear rejection?
Do you fear humiliation?

Imperfect.
That's what they would tell you if you were you around them
If, instead of that mask
You revealed to them the raw beauty beneath the cover up 
With all the quirks, oddities, and extremes
That make you, you
That make you beautiful
That make you perfect

To lie to yourself is the deepest of sins
To give in, and to become something you aren't
That, that is worse than the magnificent creature you are 
This monster made of plastic
This isn't you

Where did you go?

© 2011 Carly Ithilhin


Author's Note

Carly Ithilhin
Gahhh... Kind of crappy. I don't usually write poetry... But I couldn't figure out how to make it into a story... Then it would change.. So... Yeah...

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Nah its not crappy.its good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on October 22, 2011
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Carly Ithilhin
Carly Ithilhin

Placerville, CA



About
Greetings, fellow writers. My name is Carly, obviously. I'm fourteen years old, but does that really matter? I'm most likely more talented than you're expecting. I focus mainly on fantasy and psychol.. more..

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