Clarity

Clarity

A Poem by Violet's Run
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Hind sight is 20/20 I am hoping to restructure before the end of the line...

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Clarity


Keep a sharp eye on the bottom line"
It might be getting away form you
Like an antelope leaping over the fence
Or an elephant stampeding down the street
It is a rogue when it leaves the pack
And stretches out ceaselessly in the ether..
Do not watch a disembodied pipe dream die
Just recycle it
Into a better more adjusted strategy
To combat our damn 
Advancing age  and
Our own morbidity

© 2015 Violet's Run


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i hear you loud and clear ... accept, adjust and reinvent ... the youthful pipe dream of invincibility lasts as long as strength and bones endure .. as the wolves gather we can exercise, eat healthy and maintain the stoop ... when they gain it i will hopefully be at peace and ready .. :)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank you for the read and the comment.. I know what a disembodies pipe dream is .. and boy does it suck... thanks again..'
susan

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a strong write and motivated, I liked do not watch a disembodied pipe dream
die just recycle it, that's great positive thinking, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 15, 2015
Last Updated on February 15, 2015
Tags: age, death, life, plans, regret, energy, hope, fire

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Violet's Run
Violet's Run

san joaquin valley, CA



About
My grandmother was Violet. I share her name I am Susan Violet.. But she was the strongest most beautiful woman I have met. For some reason when I started writing again I had this image of her telling .. more..

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