Meet The Takers

Meet The Takers
by Tricia Pattinson

This pool of sharks
Boils over its covetous stew
Greed, envy, wanna bees soup

To take or give is their illusion
Their soup is never done
Your salt is all they want

Behind their smile
Stares burnt out eyes
Prepare to be set on fire

For takers are heavy handed

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

Much depth....
and boldness as well
Great pen :)

[Tricia Pattinson]

:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

[A. Amos]

I was smiling while reading, such a view you have created. I loved the honesty of poetry...great job!