We're Fine

We're Fine
by Tricia Pattinson

We crush together
Rest In Peace our lives
Moments of pleasure
Mind designs

You're okie dokie
Feel just fine
You'll find the door
Your heart's design

It's in our mirrors
We're holding hands
Pressing together
On both sides

Reviews

[Aprille]

"We're Fine"... I enjoyed reading, it is very well-written. :)

[Daydreamer]

Very deep writing,indeed!! I am benumbed by the fact that I can't completely figure out what the poem means or break down the phrases to get full meanings...yet, I enjoy reading your work because it's free verse and adore writings I can slowly take in and adopt to my life.... It feels very refreshing and freeing to find ineffable feelings, for a while being scribbled into letters you can finally read ...
P.S I respect that you refrain from expoundations on your writings :)

[Tricia Pattinson]

I love that you found something in it that, if for only a moment, gives you positive feelings. Words are limited in the amount of info they convey. Some poems are like photographs, others like watercolors...We each gain from them what we need.

[Daydreamer]

pretty insightful!