Message In The Tea Leaves

Uses a lyrical voice with 3 beats at the end of each line.

Message In The Tea Leaves
by Tricia Pattinson

I see starz

In the tea leaves

I see starz

Circling Home

I see starz

Dreaming of peace

I see starz

Remembering love

When the night

Carries it own heat

When the night

Sings so sweet

Its in the night

I see the tea leaves

In the night

Starz sing

In the night

We can see Home

Wind... you'll lift me homeward

Wind... I'll be a rocketeer

Wind... I'll hold on tightly

Wind... you're fire in air

I see the starz

In the tea leaves

I see the starz

Seeking forever

I see the starz

Message in the tea leaves

We can do better

We can heal the World

We can remember

We are starz walking on Earth

We will soon wake up

Soon

We will soon wake up

We will soon wake up...

Reviews

[Blake Fodor]

Beautiful with excellent imagery. Like Chris, the mis-spelled "stars" was kind of off for me. LOL

[Tricia Pattinson]

Smiles. Thank you.

[J Schwenk]

I like how you repeated tea leaves! It also adds a bit of humor the way you spelled "starz", almost like how it sounds when you say it, good poetry!

[Tricia Pattinson]

Smiles. Thank you.