Your Scar

You just appeared in my life,

A broken boy filled with strife.

I picked you up, helped you heal

So in turn you taught me how to feel.

We tried to make a new life, a life of bliss

Never guessing it would end up like this. 

You wanted to be free, 

But I wasn't ready to let you be. 

So, like a child you pulled away, ripping at my skin.

The cut bleeds fresh everyday, as I let the pain in. 

Praying that one day you will see me as I see you, 

But letting you live everyday as you wish to. 

Reviews

[etxcp]

wow, what genius you are with a keyboard...

[closed..acct]

So poetic and such a wonderful flow.
I really enjoyed this write, it's sad
and herat breaking, but nicely expressed.