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Just a little poem... sometimes we may want others to talk to us, but not want to take their time.

I doubt you are up...

And even though i am thinking about calling you

I think you may be in bed...

In case you are around, would you like to call? 

I would like to hear your voice. 

But am afraid of waking you up.

Author's Note

Just a few lines... eh.

Reviews

[Starsong]

I enjoy your little pieces. They aren't long, but manage to get a whole thought, an entire story, across in such a small bit of writing.

[Storyteller of Dimensio..]

First review! :D

It sounds like somebody is peaking into the mailbox. Nice piece again, sound like a bit sad love story in background. Really sparked my imagination. Cute little poem. Title could be something like: Voicemail or something like that ;)
You may want to think a bit more about separating some lines for better effects.