Caught

I've been caught.

Caught in the moment

Caught in time where the air feels electric

An electricity that makes every moment feel all the more sacred.

I've been caught.

Captured by Mother Nature's purest gift

And released into the giddy excitement as we venture further

and further still.

I've been caught.

Climbing to where earth meets the sky

until the clouds stop you in their haze.

The electricity sparking into lightning

Feeding the downpour around you.

The pitter-patter of rain falling around you until

all you feel is the chilly mountain air 

And smell the sweetness of musky rain filled trees.

I've been caught!

Caught in the rain....

Reviews

[koty bell]

Profound,eloquent and exciting great write

[Lani Lou]

Thanks love :)

[koty bell]

No prob dekker:P

[Lani Lou]

haha love you Bell :P

[koty bell]

If u really loved me youd look at my other writings...lol

[Lani Lou]

i looked at them all thank you very much... i just didnt leave a comment on them all :)

[Lani Lou]

why don't you read my other one???

[koty bell]

Whatevs..... Sure u did.. And uhhhh fine i will....butthead :-P

[Lani Lou]

I did... believe what you want... but I did...

[koty bell]

:-) ;-) :-( :-P =-O :O :-( :-P B-)