Sensed Unseen

Sensed Unseen

A Poem by Lanny



Sensed Unseen


Flutters of skin-skimming caresses,
Tiny, breathy kisses
Lightly, softly
Ghosting hairs on the romanced arm of fortuned opportunity.

But sense can never see
Such phantomed exhalations of invisibility.

Lanny


© 2018 Lanny


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been there , done that , I LIKE IT.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lanny

1 Year Ago

Pam,

Thanks for your reflective comment, and all the best,

Lanny
I, too, got a shiver from this one...reminds me of a favorite film of mine called "the uninvited" from 1944...great ghost story...no blood, no gore, just the rising hairs and the chills...
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lanny

1 Year Ago

I truly appreciate the specific feedback and your kindness, so happy you enjoyed it.

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How lovely. Your words sent a shiver down my spine. A delightful one I might add. Very nicely done.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lanny

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for your wonderful comment!
All the best,
Lanny

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3 Reviews
Added on December 9, 2018
Last Updated on December 27, 2018
Tags: nature, environment, mystical, love, romance, senses, supernatural

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