I see things

I see things that other people wouldn't even give a glance,

For example, the way people walk, the way they hold their stance,

 

I tend to look within, through the eyes, the gates to the soul,

I tend to watch their ways, how they act, and not what they recite from a scroll,

 

I like to watch the broken, for they're the hardest to read,

Its only that I've been there, that I understand their need.

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

This is very good. It's simply written so the message is clear which i like. Having been there helps to understand although I have one question - how can you know someone by watching? I'm not sure we can know someone anyway, least of all ourselves.
Well done - a profound and concise piece of writing.
regards
Alan

[Steph]

I really enjoyed this! It made me think of myself in a way, I love people watching and I'm always looking at others and wondering about their lives. I really like your rhyming scheme, it makes the lines flow so easily into one another. Good job!

[ShooBLeeDoo]

Thank you, yes I like to observe people too and yes I also like a poem to rhyme, like its dancing rat tat tat tat tat, nice one.

[anumenon]

may be un finished, but poem reveals the fact that you r a good public watcher(you have a good vision)

[ShooBLeeDoo]

Thanks, yes, I am a watcher, an observer, like spiderman super senses, lol (:

[anumenon]

nice dude

[ShooBLeeDoo]

thanks dudette (;