Love Without Words
A Poem by
Whiskurz
You took my hand
We both shared smiles
You captured my heart
With your feminine wiles
You ran your fingers
Through my hair
The dance floor was full
But no one was there
Blinded by your beauty
You were all I could see
I was lost in you
You were lost in me
We kept on dancing
When the music died
The music we heard
Was coming from inside
Love without words
Really does exist
It happened to us
The night we kissed
© 2012 Whiskurz
Reviews
Yes...I know this feeling, it overflows with the silent murmur of two hearts and souls in love...
Just beautiful, enjoyed very much.
Helen.
Posted 12 Years Ago
A beautiful poem. When we dance with the right pardner. The world is a better place. I like the good places you took me with you in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
A beautiful poem. When we dance with the right pardner. The world is a better place. I like the good places you took me with you in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
I'm in love with this poem! nice work!
Posted 12 Years Ago
I'm in love with this poem! nice work!
Absolutely wonderful. I loved reading it. It was soft, but full of emotion. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Absolutely wonderful. I loved reading it. It was soft, but full of emotion. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Remarkably tender thoughts of a privately shared love.
A poet extraordinaire!
Your work is a privilege to read.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Remarkably tender thoughts of a privately shared love.
A poet extraordinaire!
Your work is a privilege to read.
This is beautiful. Amazing how a lot can be done even in the absence of words. Beautiful piece.
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is beautiful. Amazing how a lot can be done even in the absence of words. Beautiful piece.
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Added on July 11, 2012
Last Updated on July 11, 2012
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