Welcome to My Heart

Enter a land of shattered dreams

And cast aside desires

The gates are built on broken smiles

And promises made by liars

A place where love's not welcome

For it simply cannot be found

A land of crushed and hollow souls

Where screams don't make a sound

A place where hope does not exist

And compassion cannot survive

Where second chances are just a myth

And pain and heartache thrive

A land where lakes are filled with tears

And memories once made, now lost

A bridge that leads to nowhere

With a void that can't be crossed

A place you've made with years of hurt

Your priceless work of art

An empty shell of a broken man

Welcome to my heart

Reviews

[D. Pesek]

this is a great piece, I loved the flow. well done, I look forward to seeing more of your work.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend.....Whisk

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An awesome poem written by an awesome poet :)

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend.....Whisk

[buckeyebren]

The decription of this heart is so poignant and clear that I see exactly
the pain and agony built up by years of pain. The type pain that only time and betrayed trust could establish and deliver. A beautifully written poise which reaches not only the mind but the soul. Although painful to read for me, it is a pleasure also. Thank you for sharing such skill.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend.....Whisk

[Helen Woodward]

Sob!!! Such a sad piece, nonetheless poignant in delivery and understanding. Beautifully written with a fervent pen. You have a way with words that overflows with observation skill...
Congrats!
Helen :)

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WOW, I totally love this write, this is amazing

[Whiskurz]

Thank you......Whisk