Where The Rip Began

Where The Rip Began

A Poem by Whiskurz

I've often wondered where we went wrong
What led to the steps that we took
I try to look back to see the mistakes
But it hurts too much when I look

Who was at fault, who do we blame?
Was it you or something I did?
Did both of us know something was wrong
And was it simply something we hid?

The harder we tried, the more my heart tore
I could feel it down deep in my chest
You always tried to cover your pain
And I knew you were trying your best

Why does this happen to people like us?
For you were the love of my life
We even talked about starting a family
Becoming a husband and wife

I can't tell you why things turn out this way
I don't think that anyone can
We could have mended the holes in our hearts
If we knew where the rip had began

© 2012 Whiskurz


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Gut wrenching incomprehension to loss of love and a future wished for. Where did we go wrong? - And not being able to pinpoint it is even worse. The chinese water torture of unattributed regret.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, I can relate....so sad, living love is not easy.
'if we knew where the rip had began'...love that line.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2012
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