Never Ending Need

A poem should touch the inner core

Where feelings are only found

A place that you alone can see

Where love and hate abound

A poem is a tear before you cry

Or a smile before you feel

A little pain your being craves

Before your heart can heal

A poem is a memory cast aside

Before your mind is free

It's often dreams that's left behind

A misplaced destiny

A poem is what you feel inside

That makes you who you are

A poem is written with tears and blood

To mend that endless scar

A poem is felt before the words

And can cause your soul to bleed

A poem is never a state of mind

But a never ending need

Reviews

[The Dreamer]

WOWW - so true. amazing!

[KarinaT]

That pretty much sums it up. Thank you for knowing how to say it. Beautiful.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you ......Whisk

[Frieda P]

You are a prolific composer of words, I really enjoyed this immensely!

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[Michael G.]

No review... Sorry Whisk.


Just standing and applauding.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you Michael.......Whisk

[G!o]

Wow!! Seriously i can't explain the beauty of this poem. The whole idea of it in general is saw raw and pure. This is amazing how your have given poetry a whole new beautiful definition. This is lovely and amazing whisk! I have to share this...please... :')

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk