The Picture Frame

The Picture Frame

A Poem by Whiskurz

I borrowed your old picture 
I just couldn't help myself
I picked you up and dusted you off
From high upon my shelf

I told you how much I miss you
I know you had to leave
While talking to your photograph
A memory finds my sleeve

Your eyes still hold me hostage
The way they used to do
And I still see a little of me
Each time I look at you

We couldn't have known forever
Would only mean ten years
Another memory finds my sleeve
Then slowly disappears

I never got to say goodbye
Before you went away
My heart's become the picture frame
Where you will always stay

© 2012 Whiskurz


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Perfect. This was just perfect. I love everything about it. The only thing I don't like is that I didn't write it. :) very, very cool my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"I never got to say goodbye

Before you went away

My heart's become the picture frame

Where you will always stay"
A powerful write with some good lines...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The simplicity and the beauty of this doesn't compare to the profound feeling of such sadness conveyed. Written in a very honest open way. Well done, Whisk.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Absolutely amazing. Just perfectly beautiful. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


That's simply beautiful, hindsight is always 20/20. well done Whisk :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on December 4, 2012
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