The Perfect Girl

The Perfect Girl

A Poem by Whiskurz

I love the way she looks at me
When we go out for a walk
I love how she just listens
And always lets me talk

I love the way she lets me choose
What we're watching on TV
And when I leave to go to work
I know she's missing me

I never see her mother
The way it's supposed to be
She never wants my credit cards
I love her fervently

She never tells me what to do
Like taking out the trash
Or if she see a sale somewhere
She never asks for cash

We never watch a chick flick
She lets me be a man
So I run my fingers through her hair
Just as often as I can

I know we'll be together
Until the very end
I know that she'll be faithful
And always be my friend

A love like this is very rare
And often hard to find
Can you tell I love my dog
She's really one of a kind

© 2013 Whiskurz

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Well, of course it was too good to be true! This made me smile. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Dogs are faithful friends. I thought the ending was really good!

Posted 7 Years Ago

A Dog is mans best Friend.... It's so true they are always there, waiting for you and always have time for you.

Posted 7 Years Ago

You almost got me there..a dog??? I thought this was a blow up doll!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Oh, you got me on this one! Not the ending I was expecting-it's nice to get surprised! Great rhymes, rhythm and flow to this and it made me smile.

Posted 7 Years Ago

There has never been a more perfect love than one's dog , we should all endeavor

Posted 7 Years Ago

Very Life Affirming. It's amazing how happy dogs and other pets can make us, or really all the sadness and loneliness they can prevent by just providing someone to whom it would seems they understand.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on April 19, 2013
Last Updated on April 19, 2013